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Editing SampleThe following “before and after” is an excerpt from a book manuscript that was presented to me to edit, followed by the same excerpt as it appeared in the published book. The writer has several books in print; this one had already been published, and the writer wanted to prepare a second edition. The fact that the manuscript had already been in print means that this writing sample is relatively clean. Trust me—a lot of what I get is in far worse shape than this. Even still, there were still some rough edges that needed a little work. Look carefully at the “Before” and the “After” to see what I did. I show you this example because the finished book received a Book of the Month award from the online division of a national publishing house. Like I did for this writer, I can help you pursue—and achieve—excellence in your written communication. Before Science Fairs are one of the best opportunities for a student to demonstrate his skill and knowledge about a researched science or engineering topic. This is one of the most overlooked occasions for students, because many adults tend to see Science Fair projects as a burden. I will concede that science projects take a sizable amount of time, yet (in my opinion) the reward to the child’s self esteem and character far outweigh the effort. A Science Fair project is the culmination of hours of reading, researching, experimenting, investigating, interviewing, writing, and ___________ (place your favorite verb in the blank)! Science is multi-sensory; that is, it incorporates all of the senses. Science also incorporates most subjects, such as reading, spelling, comprehension, listening, mathematics, thinking, and inference. Many adults may feel that it takes a dedicated student with a love of learning to cheerfully do a Science project. While this may not be the case for an assigned topic (perhaps one of interest to the adult), generally, if the venture is in an area of the student’s interest it will be difficult to hold him back! Remember that while Science Fair projects tend to be family projects, the emphasis should be on helping and directing your child. (There is a fine line here that I have sometimes crossed. The project becomes mine when I won’t listen to my children’s input!) I hope this book encourages you to seek out information to help your child do a project that follows scientific and logical thought. A volcano using baking soda and vinegar is not a Science Project! (Don’t feel bad if you’ve done one, so have we!) I will give you specific guidelines about what makes a great topic and where to find one. This is by no means a complete or authoritative work on topic. Yet, this book will help you understand what is required for entry into the upper level fairs. There are many wonderful books in the library on how to do a science fair project but few that deal with understanding the paper work that goes on behind the scenes. This work is designed principally to encourage and facilitate the entire process! You will find a list of recommended resources at the end of this book. You will also see science keys written in italics sprinkled throughout the book. These are helpful hints to remember as you prepare for competition. After Science fairs are one of the best opportunities for a student to demonstrate scientific skill and knowledge. It is one of the most overlooked occasions for students because many adults tend to see science fair projects as a burden. I will concede that science projects take a sizable amount of time, yet in my opinion, the reward to the child’s self-esteem and character far outweigh the effort. A science fair project is the culmination of hours of reading, researching, experimenting, investigating, interviewing, writing and ___________ (place your favorite verb in the blank!). Science is multi-sensory; that is, it incorporates all five physical senses. Science also incorporates many subjects, such as reading, spelling, comprehension, listening, mathematics, thinking and logic. Many adults may feel that it takes a dedicated student with a love of learning to cheerfully do a science project. While this may not be the case for an assigned topic, which perhaps is only interesting to the adult, a venture into an area of the student’s interest will make it difficult to hold him back! Remember that while science fair projects tend to be family projects, the emphasis should be on helping and directing the student. This is a fine line that I have sometimes crossed with my own children. The project becomes mine, not theirs, when I won’t listen to their input! I hope this book encourages you to seek out information to help your child or student do a project that follows scientific and logical thought. Making a volcano using baking soda and vinegar is not a science project! (Don’t feel bad if you’ve done one; so have we!) I will give you specific guidelines about what makes a great topic and where to find one. This is by no means a complete or authoritative work on science fairs. Even so, this book will help you understand what is required for entry into upper-level fairs. There are many wonderful books in the library on how to do a science fair project but few that deal with understanding the paperwork that goes on behind the scenes. This work is designed principally to encourage you in working through the entire process of entering a science fair! You will find a list of recommended resources at the end of this book. You will also see italicized science keys sprinkled throughout the book. These are helpful hints to remember as you prepare for competition. One final note: Remember, as parents you are ultimately responsible in helping your child or student to achieve the highest level of success possible. I have heard of countless horror stories relating to science fairs. These situations were the result of a child not adhering to the guidelines required for upper-level competitions, some through no fault of their own. They were misguided, perhaps unintentionally, by those in authority. The results were anything from being disqualified from competition to winning first prize in their school division but being disqualified from upper-level competiton. These situations may have been averted by double-checking the guidelines. In some cases paperwork wasn’t signed, the wrong (non-approved) materials were used for experimentation, or paperwork was turned in late! I’ve heard of parents having to hound teachers to get the necessary forms signed and turned in on time! While this seems unnecessary, it happens. Just be aware that parents as well as educators need to be prepared by understanding the rules. I pray that this book helps you to anticipate problems and prevent unnecessary heartache! Reprinted from An Insider’s Guide to Successful Science Fair Projects, © Copyright 2002 by Felice Gerwitz. Published by Media Angels, Inc., Fort Myers, Fla. Visit their web site at www.MediaAngels.com |
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